Finish Line
by Patrick Meeds

     
    What do you mean
    when you say a work in progress?
    What do you mean when you say
    give a man a fish and you’ll smell him 
    coming a mile away? When you say 
    a mile away do you mean a distance
    that never changes? An acceptable
    amount of spoilage? Where exactly
    are these parts per million you speak of?
    When I was a child and my mother
    wanted to keep me busy she would
    give me a tangled wind chime to untangle.
    Sometimes the Christmas lights
    were brought out in August. Like an oddly
    shaped building I too sometimes emit
    a sound in high winds. Like a cello bowed
    in the night. Like sand being blown across
    the surface of a parking lot. The jingle of keys.
    Now the meshing of gears begins and the great
    machine starts to move. Seeding the sky
    with smoke. Most of what we do is forgotten.
    
    
Packingtown Review – Vol. 22, Fall 2024

Patrick Meeds lives in Syracuse, NY and studies writing at the Syracuse YMCA’s Downtown Writer’s Center. He has been previously published in Stone Canoe literary journal, the New Ohio Review, Tupelo Quarterly, the Atticus Review, Whiskey Island, Guernica, The Pinch, and Nine Mile Review among others.

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