Packingtown Review
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On Saving the World
by
Savannah McLeod
Ms. Katherine, (Six Grade English)
You told us to write a poem about what we’d do to save
the world.
I thought I’d tell you about my mom’s freckles, which fall
onto the floor each and every night.
They clump down in heaps of browns and reds,
assorted spices and peppers
that she never wanted to sprinkle
upon me.
And while she brushes out the loose, thickening hairs
she tells me that she’s
oh so
sorry
about Nicholas,
who tells other bus-kids that my mom isn’t really sick.
“If she vomits blood she’s a vampire,
must just have as a knack for taking people’s money.”
The other kids stare
and then laugh along
as if their moms won’t ever die,
and I can’t quite understand why this is.
Or why Nicholas always has bruises
on his left elbow, beneath his chin,
purples swallowing up his skin like some sort of tumor
or oozing acid,
and I can’t help but wonder if we all have one of those
swelling from our oily bodies.
It is wrong that I can’t even save her,
and that during the lifespan of this poem
I’ve longed to be
those kids
on the bus
putting the earbud wires right below their nostrils
and shouting “Hey Janice! Who am I?”
Perhaps these kids,
hiccupping from stop to stop,
are the only ones who believe
they can still
save the world.
Packingtown Review – Vol.9, Fall 2017
Savannah McLeod
is studying creative writing at Douglas Anderson School of the Arts.
Maureen Passmore
Peacock
poetry